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May 26, 2005

From Major Tom to Dr B

I got a call from my teacher, it made my day. after huffing and puffing in the Gym this morning for two hours(wheeeew), I came to the store and recieved a massege from her on the phone. She has been to my pages,(I am greatful Dr B ), and she likes two of my poems, -her last lover, which in a way is written for delicious Mrs, Anne Sexton, and -their house.

Well I have to be more carefull about what I write now more. She does not know about my shameless ways, although if she reads more she will find out, but she is younger than me, and I am sure she would understand, she is a poet afterall, and a woman. Both are fantastic qualities in my book. You know how some people effect your life, knowingly or unknowingly, well she has helped me a lot in my poetry, and more than anything she has thought me how to REWRITE a poem, how to thigten it up, clean it, and make it better, and anybo0dy who writes knows, there is such a pleasure in that. It is like a sculptor, finnesing with his creation, taking aaway some, and adding some, the process is so deliciously enjoyable to me.

Well, Shrink lady is back, and I am so happy, she adds so much to this diolugue, and as ever her comments are comprehensive and fine.
Maryam, my LiL sis, has left me a comment, asking if I submitted any poetry. the answer is;NO. not yet, I know I got you guys to read a bit more of my poetry, and come up with the list of your favorites, but I am not ready yet. But you know now that I found Dr B, I might ask her for private tutoring again, and with her guidence, who knows, we might get there. So do forgive me, and be patient. Yesterday I wrote a few more paragraph of THE BOOK, it is a work in process, so if you were interested, do go to the book section, I think I have at least seven paragraphs of the first chapter, I wellcome your comments, and feed back.

Amin has become more independent. he told Kiana, and me that the sleeping arrangement is over, and he likes to sleep alone. So last night Kiana and I, made a make shift bed on the floor of her room, since her bed is too small to fit both of us. It was magical, we talked, and I deciphered my favorite Lulaby that I used to sing to both of them when they were infants and todllers,-Annie's Song, by John Denver, " you fill up my senses like a night in the forrest, like a mountain in spring times, like a walk in the rain.....", I sang the song to her, and we went over the words and the meanings, and as always she surprised me with the depth of her knowing, and the promise of so many Diologues we will have, just Kiana and me. before you know it she fell sleep, but about 5;am this morning she was back in my bed, holding to her silly daddy, and sleeping.

last night with Amin busy with his new obsession, STAR WARS, and Marjan being on the phone with Fafar, I got the chance to watch three hours of LAW&ORDER. I enjoyed it as I ussually do. Well no comments from my main man CYRUS yesterday, and none from Fereydoon, Inasy is still busy with her friends pregnancy I guess. Fafar is waiting for her Husband who is travelling, while she looks at the Gag ball and chains and sighs. Chey is probably busy getting settled in her new place, Metal is still absent, I do check her poetry, she has written many new ones, we will wait for her to come back again.

Posted by Idinraha at May 26, 2005 10:36 AM

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