Idinraha unshackled...

The essance of Fire
Tracing the slope
Muted worm
Breakfast
Breakfast in SanTaigo
Lonely Jest
Longing in Siluhettes
Foreplay
Casy was not killed by a bullet
Shams
Eating you alive
The bitch, the cunt
For my lover, who left before the last supper
Her green Africa
Monday in blue
The Goul and the mermaid
The gigolo and the poet soldier (this I am biased ;-)

If you want me to narrow it down more, pick the first 4 and remember Spell check before you send anything anywhere.

one more thing: my favorite photo was : Beautiful Hands! (ah...)

If I read it correctly, then add Inas choice too. I read it as a tragic poem of rejection; inviting someone waiting for their move only to be spurned. You could also use it as metaphor to represent life or something you want where you are inviting it in and fate as that "it" whatever you are waiting to see happen walks away. I love her character for she knows what she wants and goes after it. I like his character since he lets her simmer a bit more in her jucies. of course dear SL there are other ramifications to this, Chess could represent life, and this can be analysed deeper.

That's wonderful that you are submitting 20 poems. Don't forget to spell-check them, though. OK, Jose?

THOMAS CROWN AFFAIR, one of the sexiest scenes ever is a game of chess played in that movie, In my poem they are both intteligent, carefull lovers. a bit of gamemanship always add a bit of spice to any realationship.

"If I read it correctly, then add Inas choice too. I read it as a tragic poem of rejection; inviting someone waiting for their move only to be spurned. You could also use it as metaphor to represent life or something you want where you are inviting it in and fate as that "it" whatever you are waiting to see happen walks away."

Idni - hang on there - that was what I wrote. The rest is not mine. U must stop putting words that are mine under my name. I read it three times and thought, "When did I write that?? Can't remember drinking last night..."

And I'm talking to myself now??

This Idni is yours -

"I love her character for she knows what she wants and goes after it. I like his character since he lets her simmer a bit more in her jucies. of course dear SL there are other ramifications to this, Chess could represent life, and this can be analysed deeper."

Do please correct it by putting up this post.

Thank you.

vay javad joon hol shodam! sorry, gheybat ziad dashtam. But I know which poems are my fav's!

- Audrey Hepburn and Albert Finney
- Dance
- Monday in Blue

I dont write no comments because very busy time right now, BUT I login at least once a week and enjoy your beautiful poems and meaningfull rants.