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May 03, 2005
No more Freebees................
MAY A THOUSAND BEES NEST IN YOUR ARMPITS, so, how do you like that, MAY YOU LOSE YOUR WARRANTIES ON YOUR GERMAN CARS, AND HAVE TO PAY TROUGH THE NOSE. it is getting better, MAY YOUR MOTHER IN LAW MOVES IN WITH YOU. I know that one is below the belt, MAY YOU BECOME ALLERGIC TO VIAGRA, OR ANY MALE PERFORMANCE ENHANCEMENTS DRUGS, now that one is good.
No more Rants, or poetry, nada, none, zilch, I am tired of giving and giving, and not getting anything back. You do not even seem to read these God-Damned pages. I asked you nicely, politely, over and over again, and it will be no more morsels of my thoughts for you, untill you perform.
So, untill each one of you, all five and half of you, sends me a comment, and chooses at least two or three of my poems as their favorite, I will refuse to share my seductive bare assed dance with you, and I am serious, enough is enough, so get to work, and move your lazy behinds ( I am being polite), if you want more of me, you got to give me some. so untill I get your votes, I will be on strike, my poetry will be posted on POETS.COM, as it used to be, and my rants, for the time being I will scribble them down on regular paper and post them somewhere else. SO COME ON, GET WITH IT.
Posted by Idinraha at May 3, 2005 01:37 PM
Comments
Been so busy reading them.. Cannot choose just yet..
Posted by: Inasy at May 3, 2005 01:59 PM
You want me to help you pick a poem? Me who is poetry-impaired. OK I will try, most of the time I struggled with understanding poetry.
Posted by: ShrinkLady at May 3, 2005 02:38 PM
Empty threats! You can not stop writing. You are too addicted to write rants and let us know more about you and your thoughts. Sorry! Know you too well!!
Posted by: Maryam at May 3, 2005 02:47 PM
Yes I do, so if you be a dear, My Shrink Lady, and kind enough to suggest two or three that you liked, we will get this how on the road.
Posted by: Idinraha at May 3, 2005 03:27 PM
I already have posted which ones I like. So read my damn comments you lazy bum! Or pick YOUR favorite 10 and then I pick among them. :)~
Posted by: LiveLife at May 3, 2005 08:37 PM
OK they are not free? FINE! How much you charge? I buy them, but sign all the rights to me!
How is that for a business, man?
Posted by: LiveLife at May 3, 2005 08:39 PM
Hmmm... decisions, decisions...
The Viagra threat is kind of immaterial, but as for the possibility of a thousand bees nesting in my armpits... that is a pretty tickling thought - and I've already experienced the rest of your curses, thank you. So let me sleep on this...
Say, does this mean no more BOOK also?
Posted by: cycho
at May 4, 2005 12:22 AM
I picked several that I could understand...as mentioned am not very good at understanding poetry. I will also try to explain why I picked them.
1. Walking in Saigon - very simple which is what makes it so sad and distressing - it does a good job of setting the grief striken place, the power imbalance, the need to put closure on the past and the guilt and sadness associated with past behaviors.
2. Audery Hepburn and Albert Finney - I think fav. because it does a great job and capturing the couple, the evinronment and the dynamics between them. It is a fun and passionate poem remininscent of the 1950s - carefree, fun and with strong self-assured characters.
3. Sleeping wih Amin and Kiaria - one of the greatest pleasures in life is to be able to have the chance to sleep with your kids (not in the Michael Jackson sense for clarification). It is the closeness and bonding that you have with a child when they are young. I remember as a child sleeping with my mother - it was the best part of my childhood and something I looked forward to when I was six or seven.
4. Love Letter to Marjan, travelling - captures the loneliness of the spouse that is left alone while the other spouse travels. The emptiness and the memories and the waiting.
5. Dance - liked it; quite a powerful and passionate - kind of us the shrewlike woman with the powerful and determined partner. As a kind of amusing look to it and hints at the opening of a tango. I am sorry but I did not get the last three lines.
6. Curves Novices - a very honest look at the excitment and curiousity of a novel sexual experience. Captures the anxiety provoking moment with the eagar desire to explore.
OK, I looked and these are the few I picked and why they would work. I hope this helps.
Posted by: ShrinkLady at May 4, 2005 01:02 AM
I hope I am spared the curses especially the thousand bees in my armpits.
Have a great day.
Posted by: ShrinkLady at May 4, 2005 01:03 AM
yeah, cyrus has a point. Your threat is kinda tempting! hehe
Posted by: LiveLife at May 4, 2005 02:18 AM
As much as I like honey, here are my picks (not in any specific order):
Sorrows of Serpents
Lonely jest
Table manners
Your flesh, My bones
The Goul, and the Mermaid
Monday In Blue
Posted by: cycho
at May 5, 2005 12:50 AM